The header text isn't leading the eye anywhere because the words "your music" come backwards instead of leading the eye further in one direction. I do however like the placement of the logo when you are considering how it breaks off near the end and the logo fills up that gap. Finally the text on the very bottom needs a magnifying glass to read. Something needs to give in this ad because it is wordy, and I'm certain that something on this page is unnecessary.
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