"Greg what in the world could you say about this one that you haven't already said abut the typography in the other ones?" Well this one is I took a second glance at the text in the bottom left and it's not as bad as previously stated. I do think it could stand out a bit more but possibly not as dramatically as the other one. I also think that the four lines of the important text is way too much. Also "We build to more" doesn't even make sense. Shouldn't it be "We build more than a blueprint?" Come on guys your design looks really cool and you messed up the most important text in the entire advertisement.
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